Did I?

Did I ever tell you
how much you hurt me?
When I put every efforts
of mine on you,
then you suddenly broke it?

Not just the care
I once felt about you,
but my heat.

The little fragile heart,
which is easily broke,
then now you are,
breaking in without a glance,
no with a doubt.

Did I ever tell you?

Author's Note

I really forgot how to write poems after more than a month...

Reviews

[the crying cup]

this is awsome poetry, reely powerful words

[Ruth]

Sometimes, we need to say it loudly or indeed scream at the world that we are hurt like this! Powerful words hon, deep and powerful xx

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good write...!!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Everyone forgets, but always remebered

[Sunflower 20]

great emotion in this poem, keep it up :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww... so heart-breaking this poem seems to show.. i still enjoy reading your poems!! =D

[Short.Nerd]

Nice!

[Roxi L]

You must really have it stuck in your brain 'cause it is exacly the style I remember. Excellent!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi~

[akapr17other]

I'm sorry I'm just really not in the mood for sad poems. However, the quality is really good and it's well structured. I would have enjoyed it more at a better time...maybe I'll read it again later....Thanks for sharing.