Fidget

Fidget

A Poem by Ben Taylor

Sometimes the lack of sunlight seems like a palpable presence.
When the sidewalk shadows creep off to either horizon and the endless lines
of well trimmed lawns becomes soft seas of grey and black,
I can feel uncallused, lukewarm fingers in my hair and on my back.
The darkness is someone to talk to, someone to recount woes to
when the lights evanesce.
Few others have witnessed my vindictive tears
or vitriolic diatribes -- this paper absorbs the moisture beneath my eyes
whilst the nights dampens the echoes of my tirades.
I am empty, I am sated,
but my eyes refuse to close.

© 2013 Ben Taylor


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Wow, Ben.. this is incredible.. such wonderful images! My favorite lines:

The darkness is someone to talk to, someone to recount woes to
when the lights evanesce.

All of it contains wonderful lines.. stark images.. it makes me want to read this over and over again to let it all settle inside my mind. Wonderful job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ben Taylor

12 Years Ago

Thanks, Lori :)
Ravyne Hawke

12 Years Ago

always, Ben =)

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Added on May 31, 2013
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Ben Taylor
Ben Taylor

Columbia, MO



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