Growth Rings

Words to use: discovery zero observe tie knowledge

You are

a Buddhist presence,

a redwood in a suburb. 

You were a discovery

I did not deserve,

a gift that I am

forever in debt for. 

I have tied myself to you,

begging everyone I know

to observe, 

and acknowledge

that you take zero s**t,

and are worth investing in.

Reviews

[Lisasview]

First read of yours and I must say I did enjoy it. Quite easy to read as it flowed very well.
I really liked these simple lines...
You are
a Buddhist presence,

a redwood in a suburb.

Really easy to relate to.

Although my writing is very different from yours you might enjoy my newest poem Awaken.

Lisa, Now in Spain