Free

I want to be free,

live life at no fee,

Enjoy it,

Live it,

Don't live in the pits.

I want to have a boyfriend,

I want a girlfriend (not the gay type) 

I want no limits,

Live life at no minutes.

But parents stop that,

put life at a dot,

try and cry, 

and then listen, NOT! :P

Kiss the people I love, 

send crime with a dove, 

I want to be free, 

live life at no FEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Note

I like this one of mine, I'm just starting with poems, so please read and enjoy.

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this. I know a lot of people can truly relate to this. I honestly can say sometimes I want to be free, but since I have boundaries on life I've become such a nice young lady ;) Hehe. But you done a great job expressing your feelings on how you really want to be free.
Outstanding!



Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Brittany]

Are you perhaps a student? I really like your expression of feelings in this one. The struggle to be free is universal. Reality traps us all no matter what age. Good job.