Immortality

The way your eyes are caring
The way your smile knows
The way you walk along the beach
Wiggling your toes
the way your hair trails
As you run across the sand
The way you never know
Who I really am
And if i discover you
Will you discover me?
A strengthened bond together
Immortality

Reviews

[Crow]

I find the simplicity and expression of this honest piece.

Well written!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nive wish, view and will....

[K.M. Lucero]

I like the flow and how each line draws me in. Good job.