Unloved

I am not your puppet
i have feelings too
anger, sadness, boredom
overcomes my fragile soul
i let myself be used
and in return use others
i fear rejection
and feel unloved
it feels like i`m falling
plunging into the darkness
it swallows me up
and spits me back out, broken
there is no end
to the empty loneliness
since he left
and walked away with my heart
never a chance
to move on from
never a chance
to be free

Reviews

[Sarah]

lovely and shows true emotion
XD

[ATG]

A very interesting and well written poem. It flowed very well and I got a good sense of the emotion behind it.

[SUGATA M]

Lovely expression of your insecure state of mind

[Alessander]

it is very raw, like another reviewer remarked, and sometimes those types of pieces unguilded by rhetorical trappings can be the most honest, like a slap in the face.

it always astonishes me a bit when others can be so frank about utter dejection and emptiness.

[eleanorclaire]

This is beautiful; and so raw. Your pain just kinda seeps into the reader. It's so relatable - ha it got me thinking about my own experiences.

[Crow]

This reminds me of life in the modern world, until we become lost from the self and our happiness. These lines grabbed me the most:

"it feels like i`m falling
plunging into the darkness
it swallows me up
and spits me back out, broken"

A wonderful composition.