A walk to the light

In every darkness, there will be a ray of light

Blinking of realization, my pretense reality becomes intensely seen. The darkness fades as a ray of sunlight warms me through my bedroom window. It seems as if I'm no longer being held hostage; each restriction being released slowly.

Blood rushes through my body as I begin to feel my arms and legs. The numbness disappears as my bare feet touches the cold ground beneath me. My damp hair falls behind my shoulders; the dampness reminds me of the sweat I produced when I was restraint by darkness. Each step I take I feel more alive as I see the light shining through the doorway. My body willingly succumbs to walk away, to walk away from this lifestyle. A lifestyle, submissive to my inner darkness. A lifestyle which makes me suffer; but while pain is involuntarily, suffering is a choice. I feel the light hypnotizing me; happiness pulsing through my veins. Walking further into the light, I feel alienated by these feelings, feelings not to be compromised.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot said in the words. I wanted to know more.
"I feel the light hypnotizing me; happiness pulsing through my veins. Walking further into the light, I feel alienated by these feelings, feelings not to be compromised."
I liked the above lines. Hopeful and strong ending to the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Daniealla]

Thank you! I'll work on making my pieces fully satisfying and not leaving the reader wanting more. :))

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to make the reader want more and you are welcome my friend.

[mae23]

I really like he descriptions used in this piece. Very nicely written!

[Daniealla]

Thank you for the review! :)