The Gentle gentleman

Sometimes the temporary time spent is enough for a lifetime.

Innocent to mind ,
A gentleman rare to find.
Through his eyes I see,
A whole new world- I'm interested to feel

His hands soft to the touch,
I feel myself losing as he gains my trust.
His presence caresses my scarred soul,
Slowly melting my heart; from the freezing cold.

Our bittersweet likeness,
Pure to bliss.
Our time soon to be cut-
Effortlessly I'm sure to miss.

Reviews

[pia]

this is a very heart touching poem beautifully written
the sentences are wonderful

[Daniealla]

Thank you! :)

[Tracey~]

Holding on to those precious moments feeds us when life makes us weary. This is a beautiful journey of that love..

[Daniealla]

Yes holding on does give us some motivation. Thank you for the review :)

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Time can be so precious, and the memories so impressionable. Nice work, I enjoyed this...

[Daniealla]

Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and wonderful story shared in the poetry my friend. I liked the places, thoughts and the interaction in the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Daniealla]

Thank you for reviewing my piece and I'm glad you liked it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome dear Daniealla.