the breeze

the best advice I can give is to slow down as we travel this world

time goes by like fallen leaves
swiftly blown on the summer breeze
tumbling, spinning as they fly
across the great and infinite sky
sometimes I just sit and smile
and watch the clouds for just awhile

the breeze(c) 2013dlj

Author's Note

thanks for reading and I apologize for failing to review more poetry these last few days. I shall make amends if you will kindly be patient with me for just a bit.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like that someone uses clouds in a positive way...they are beautiful to just sit and watch...and they make such interesting shapes...but we just don't pay enough attention to them for their beauty...we just think of storms, gloomy sky etc.

there are lots of things in life we don't appreciate enough.

[Jamestown]

Well written, this has terrific flow and pleasant message!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!