Stop

"Please stop" I begged him over and over while my face drowned in tears.

"Please don't be so angry" I pleaded fearfully.

"Stop" I whimpered, almost unnoticeable,
almost like I knew I would'nt be heard.

"Stop crying" he screamed,
"You cry all the time".

I felt my strenght leave my body as my knees hit the floor.
Tired, afraid and broken I just laid there.
I laid there for a while.

The exact image of devastation.
The literal definition of broken.
That's where he left me.
So many times.

"Stop crying" he yelled.
"You're so emotional".

Reviews

[JBoone]

This makes me so angry and so vengeful. Well written. Subject makes me sick. Powerful words.

[JMaster1]

Powerful writing , brave writing

[Daniella]

Thank you so much!

[Unknown Poet]

So hurtful n emotional....
This touched my heart..
This images shows your true attachment towards him and his ignorance about your truest emotions and valuable tears ...!!!

[Daniella]

Thank you Uday.I appreciate your kind and wonderful words.

Much love
Daniella

[Unknown Poet]

You are most welcome friend...

[DeerInHeadlights]

I am sorry..

this is awful. the situation. not the poem. the poem is gut wrenchingly real and I have seen myself here in this place before. all too familiar..

[Daniella]

Thank you so much. I truly appreciate it. Yes, the situation was awful, and no one should ever have to be there. I hope you are not in this place anymore.

Much Love
Daniella

[alanwgraham]

A good portrayal of powerlessness and abuse. Fighting back can seem almost impossible!
Well written!
Alan

[Daniella]

Thank you very much Alan!
I appreciate it.
Daniella