Days without you

Don't worry... Just writing it out.

Days go one by one...
They all fade into none.
Its been two days,
Since i've seen your face.
I'd survive that,
But life holds many more of that.
With you, all was beautiful,
Without you its a handful...
A handful of s**t.
I'm livin in a pit.
Days without you are grey.
When will you come and say hey.
The morning is painful,
Without you, i've got nothing to live for.

Author's Note

Don't worry about me...not gonna do anything stupid. Just writing about it.

Reviews

[luvs2write]

I don't want to say that I know exactly how you feel, because I'm not completely sure of the details. But I'm going to tell you something just to let you know you aren't the only one. My sister+best friend has anorexia. Last summer she was living in a residential facility....it was horrible, I thought I was going to die. I started doing crazy things; talking to people that weren't there and planning out what I was going to say at her funeral. But...I got through it. Now she knows that I'm always here for her and it's still hard, but it's better. You aren't the only one, even when it really feels like you are. You know what they say, "what doesn't kill you makes you stronger"...

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you.

[Stars and Whales]

Nice job! This was another great read!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Whoa ... You know right now I'm BLOWN AWAY! I love love love your this piece! Again it's so DEEP. I know, many many can relate to this write. I CAN! OMG amazing ... I love this one TRULY! 'cause it exactly tells my feelings. I wish I had written this one!
Keep writing. Thanks for sharing your AWESOME poetry!
You have really got a talent to make others feel your words!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yuppie :) :) :) this made my day :) thanks :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

I'm GLAD! :D You are WELCOME!

[J.A. Marquez]

The name of this one drew me in. Absolutely heartbreaking, and I feel your pain. Hang on, it will get better.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you.

[sereenaoutloud]

Sad but powerful write. The emptiness we feel when we miss someone who was a part of our daily life!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yes, painful emptiness... Thanks for reading.

[closed]

another sad write...

did you know Aless wrote a poem about me with the same title?
or was that your inspiration

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Actually...this title popped up after i wrote the poem.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

And sadly...there are many many days without him.