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A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Only you i want,
Your smile came to haunt.
Dig out my grave,
Or just throw me in a cave.
I'll always return,
Until there is only one turn
Left for the world...
It can burn.
I don't care,
As long as i can be your air,
As long as i can see your hair,
Feel your lips,
As they go for the kiss.
Only you make me happy,
Without you, everything's crappy.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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Dani The Unreviewed
Just a few feelings.

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The feelings of a person who loves another, very true and very deep. It is a very lovely piece Danny, you have a nack for making me smile! All your works are emotional and rigorous and that is excellent. This one in particular is so... meaningful to me, seeing as I will not get to experience these for a long time yet. Thank you for sharing, never stop.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
Another beautiful piece."As long as i can be your air," This is deep. Selfless love. Well written Danny. Keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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