Death

Comes with a blade,
It's hands are laid...

Strange healing it brigns,
My ear rings,
All those evil things,
That society brings...

All the s**t they pile up,
All the wounds they tear up.
All of it healed,
By death's cold hands, life is sealed.
...

Reviews

[RiverRei]

Such a strange and mind blowing thing death can be. So many possibilities. No one really knows what happens when we die. Cutting is our way of tasting a bit of death without risking our lives. It is intoxicating and revitalizing as it is damaging. Great piece. Love this more than I can express.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Totally true. Though i'm not cutting myself. But nobody knows anything about death, other than that its the end of biological life...yeah but people wonder if anything else exists... I say nothing happens...but even i like to play with the possibilities...

[AaronFreitas]

What an awesome write! I love the descriptions you use and I love that last line. "By death's cold hands, life is sealed." Reminds me of the movie Final Destination. Great work :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you. Btw... Awesome movie.

[KanaDream]

Death ends everything. Pain being one... Hope being another. I like this. It almost reads like a song. Keep Dreaming, even in nightmares.