Moment

A moment,
On it went,
Wind blew away the tent.

Back then,
When there was many of them,
We were happy.

I've seen your blue eyes,
i looke deep inside,
And got mesmerized.

But i also remember,
The amber...
That night,
Took us for a flight.

Onto a mountain so high,
On the wings of a moment we fly.

Reviews

[Destiny Dreamer]

Beautiful ... Just beaUtiful the way you have used the words... Everything is just so perfect and Refreshing!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) :) :)

[dan]

IM, So tender and utterly beautiful. I'm so impressed by the structure, the wordplay...everything about it screams "Read me again!" My compliments. take care...dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much! :)

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome work IM.... I notice I always call you IM cause I don't know your real name and your one my good friends on here lol. I enjoyed your write :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

IM works just fine in the reviews lol. Thanks for your time reading this my friend. Always appreciated.