....cold steel...

Not livin,
Not dead,
Yet...

Cold, empty,
Bloody,
Angry,
Breathin...
Sadly.

Dark,
Dry,
Cry,
Die.

Cold steel,
Sharp,
Through my heart.

A red drop...
Red stain,
Blood,
Flood.

Eyes heavy,
Painful, slow,
Deadly, low.
Hole.

Reviews

[A writer]

OMFG... Are you really feelin like this? i hope not. Don't kill yourself. I just want you to know that if you die...i can't read any more of your amazing work. Stay here. If it means anything... I'm your number one fan.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah... I'm feelin like hell. Thank you. I never knew that your a fan.

[A writer]

Yeah, i love your work. Been followin your progress almost since the day you joined. I came to this site after a friend in school mentioned it. And i found your writing. I must say that when you deleted a story or poem, it was really disappointing. But i love your work. And have read almost everything you wrote.