Die!

Written in the hopes that my emotions die...didn't work.

Again,
They drain,
All my brain,
Dead pain,
In the heart ache.

New ground they claim,
Bring a lot more pain,
More...I want to gain, more pain.
Enough for my feelins to finally die,
So I can break free and fly.

Why can't you just die?!
Die!!!

Author's Note

Any thoughts?

Reviews

[A writer]

Why would you want your feelings to die? I guess they caused too much pain... Right? But, if your feelings die, you wont be human. Because, our feelings are the reason that we are human. Well done.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Not all...just the painful ones. Thanks for readin:)

[A writer]

I see. But that wont happen... No one can kill his feelings.... Or choose which one to kill. Just keep writing, and you will be fine. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I know that :) thanks :)

[A writer]

Any time :)