You made me what I am

Lot of nonsense

Trees sway,
As wind clears the way,
Let go, they scream to the ground,
Pieces of the world flying around,
The holiness of the word,
Its gone, god's ears are deaf,
Put your faith to force or you're dead.

As i walk these streets i feel dread
The world around is dead,
Shaking heads of angels.

Cursing god,
For falling for every lie,
Want to be a hero? Go die,
God, You made me what I am.

Reviews

[GalaxyGhost]

This reminds me of how people play gods with lives without question of how ethical it is. Recently I came across a weird string of videos addressing this guy's experiment of a homunculus. I don't think it's real, but it just proves my point that people should definitely have more humbleness. Too many people idolize themselves on their riches, but the poorest are the happiest. True happiness cannot be bought.

[andrew mitchell]

one needs to vent sometimes to let the good air back in!

[sereenaoutloud]

Just say it how you feel it... sometimes we all have these negative moments and we need it out.. a vent to clear the mind!
very raw and honest....As you always are Ethan!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you:)

[dan]

Blunt and straight ahead, right to the point. Telling God to die? I'm not an expert on religion but that is an awfully brave line to write, you might get some negative feedback from that. But I like your honest approach and delivery. Nicely done. take care...dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Not tellin god. Just to those people who act like they're god.

[AaronFreitas]

I love your writes when you spill your emotions buddy.. another awesome piece!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)