Love that is not returned

Writer was buggin me to post this...lol. Just kiddin :) hope you like it.

Waking up every morning,
To the crying, moaning,
Of a pointless, depressed morning.
Its another sunny,
For some, even happy
But for me crapy day.

Its so hard to get up,
I just lay, flat, down, top,
The empty silence,
The cold arrogance,
Of loneliness,
Always in the way of happiness.

The one I love,
Does not love me,
He is flying high, like a dove,
I can't reach him,
I can't fly, the air's too thin,
Hey cruel world, you win.

Author's Note

Thanks for readin, this was writer's idea, his write, i just edited it a bit. Any thoughts?

Reviews

[Tomoe Tellez]

You did a good job editing, tell writer that I like it. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) i'll tell him.

[A writer]

Lol. This is awesome :) My idea, but its not worth anything, without your edit. Thank you :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

No problem :)

[A writer]

You are awesome :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks :) :) :) :)

[RiverRei]

You're back to talking to writer?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

yeah... We sorted things out, roughly about a week ago.

[A writer]

Yup. And I'm forever grateful for his understanding, and forgiveness. :)