A memory

Thanks for reading. :)

A pair of blue eyes,
Brighter than the skies,
Stare in my cries,
As my soul dies.

A pair of ears,
Listen to my prayers,
Hear it drop, a tear.
As my hope turns into fear.

A face,
Worth more than the ace,
Takes up all space,
In my mind,
His blonde hair makes me blind.
His words, ever so kind.

His arms,
Warm hugs.

His lips,
Sweet kiss.

Author's Note

Any thoughts?? i'm curious.

Reviews

[Tomoe Tellez]

As always your poems are very lovely. I like your style, it's different, it's yours. And I understand you, everyone has their own way of expressing themselves through their writing. Reviews serve as a way of helping you as writer see the mistakes you don't see yourself, not to correct your style. I think all writers know this, we don't like to be told to change our writing style. That's another thing I like about your poems, they reflect how wonderful your mind is. Great poem! Don't change and keep writing in your own way! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you very much :-)

[Celie Rose]

Beautiful poem Danny. Expression and emotion are deep. You have a special way of writing love poems that others can relate to. Good job. Keep writing.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[McBear]

This was beautiful man :) Well done

[Dani The Unreviewed]

yea...WAS is right. thanks for the read.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

wow, this is amazing, love the poem!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you ::)

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome!!
-Silver

[zunie frost]

you are really talented .... great poetry .... your poetry just keep me reading more and more !!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you very much :)

[B]

Your perfect love
in rhyme
so endearing and close to the heart

[Riv]

Everything here is what first comes to mind when people think romance. At least when I think of it.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah. Thank you :)

[Jesse Pruett]

You hit the mark there. You got the eye's, the ear's, and the mouth on this one. And it is what's said that still says there still there for you. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yes. :) thank you. :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

AMAZING! And I totally get the line
"His blonde hair makes me blind.
His words, ever so kind. "
It is so deep!
Keep writing!
I LOVE YOU POETRY! *_*

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much.

[FaeryQueen]

this is so intriguing to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Great. Thanks. :)