For my best friends

just some lame poem, intended as a thanks to all my friends on here.

I'm living under a cloud,
My voice silent, not loud,
But heard it will be, no doubt.

I love you all,
With you, one can stand tall.
Poets and writers you are,
No worlds are too far,
From your words,
Life works,
For a better future.

You helped this pile of darkness,
Flooded me with your kindness,
Put life, into the hopelessness,
Light into darkness,
Though you never met me in life.
Just through words,
In digital worlds.

I wonder, if you even know,
How much you mean to me,
I wonder if you know...

Author's Note

Hope it wasn't too bad.

Reviews

[A writer]

No akkor basznám meg a szájukat, keresztbe-hosszába, ha valamit szólnának ellene. Tudod, hogy neked, érted él minden vers, amit neked adtam. Ha senki másra nem, de rám mindig számíthatsz. Édesem, te vagy a fiúm, én meg a tiéd. Ebben soha ne kételkedj. Én szeretlek, úgy ahogy vagy.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Én nem mondtam azt, hogy nem... én is szeretlek.

[A writer]

Már kezdtem félni... Haha. Imádlak.

[Davidgeo]

Magyar? Baratom, te lep meg. Azonban egy furcsa nyelvjarasban.

Egy erdekes beszelgetes kettutok kozott.

Ugy hangzik, mint egy film neztem tegnap este. Csak viccel! perverzek!

Le vagyok nyugozve, On tobb nyelven beszelnek.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

hahaha na már azt hittem, hogy nincsenek itt magyarok, csak èn meg a fiúm. xD

[Dani The Unreviewed]

amúgy meg három nyelvet ismerek, magyart, angolt, és szerbet.

[Davidgeo]

Nem kell aggodni a baratom. En nem beszelek , hogy nagyon jol.

[Davidgeo]

Holland, francia és néhány magyar és angol nyelven . Szerb nyelvjárás egy kicsit számomra ismeretlen

[Dani The Unreviewed]

na, akkor már van kivel beszélgetni, magyarul. :) vagy angolul. nekem mindegy kolega. melyik a könnyebb? magyar vagy az angol?

[Davidgeo]

Zo niet Nederlands... than much easier for English.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Na jól van akkor.. Lets have it your way my friend. by the way, where did you learn Hungarian? You're actually kinda good with it. :)

[Davidgeo]

I once had a brother in law from Romania; I taught him to a little Dutch he to me a bit of Hungarian

[A writer]

Hahaha :D Ki ez a koma? Még elég jól töri a nyelvünket. :) And I believe your brother in law was from Transylvania, not Romania. :) (Makes a difference you know...)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

No, téged is lehet látni? hehehe. Hun voltál eddig? Ja, elég jól érti.

[A writer]

Ja, engem is lehet látni néha néha. :) El voltam a házival foglalva. xD

[Dani The Unreviewed]

aha...már értem... na jól van kolega, majd írj üzenetet.

[A writer]

Jól van, maj írok. :-)

[Davidgeo]

Ha, yes. He lived just outside of Bucharest, indeed part of historical Transylvania.

[Obscured by the Shadows]

More than anything I would love to know how much my words mean to you, that is a writers dream. I do hope I don't offend you by considering myself your friend! But I do haha, even though we haven't even know each other a whole day and have never met! I love this poem!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

No offence taken... xD you are my friend, and so this poem goes for you too :-) since how long we met, is irrelevant.

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Fantastic :D

[ANTO]

I class myself as your friend Danny. This is a supreme testament to how friendship can traverse all border even the electronic. Top write !!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I was hoping you'd like it :D thank you my friend :D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

PS : watch out for some guy called TommyMerton. i think he might as well be another, well known troll. I'm messing him up right now xD poor thing doesn't know what to say. lol

[ANTO]

Lmao - Hey I was told about him by another writer here too. I guess he got his self a new ISP or else his meds ran out...

[Dani The Unreviewed]

xD he commented on reviews yesterday, on my work, that's the comments that were deleted. and today, i returned him the favor. xD he ran out of things to say. lol

[ANTO]

he never comes on here alone - I guess his gal has been on the booze again ...lol

[Dani The Unreviewed]

xD xD idk what kinda mindfuck he is, but i found some crap he wrote bout friends of mine and yours too. now I'm killing him in tha reviews. lol

[ANTO]

a dead fish would give more of a mind f**k D. this one's less than an arthropod

[Dani The Unreviewed]

hahaha hahaha hahaha lol watch your news feed, I'm messin with him right now. lol :D

[ANTO]

he always has kids as his avatar - must spend a l-o-o-o-o-o-o-n-g time looking at kids .

[Dani The Unreviewed]

yea. lets report him to police. xD

[ANTO]

I already did. He made the mistake of visiting a page of mines which locates and pinpoint IP addresses and locations - I sent the info to the local constabulary

[Dani The Unreviewed]

lol and he's still on the Loose. lol

[ANTO]

yeah but he just logged off - probably logged onto his pants lmao ... xD

[Dani The Unreviewed]

hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha xD lol he better or I'll keep making him cry lol.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I think he had more than enough. Lol. hahaha :D I'm going to open a "Chase trolls away" company. xD

[AaronFreitas]

We are all just living life the best we can... encouraging others who share the same passion. I see that passion in you and I see an awesome person :) Love the write :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you my friend :D

[B]

Ofcourse everyone does
what better way to connect with others but through a simple truthful world
And what lucky are the few
Who speak the same language

[McBear]

I loved it bro c: Good work and thanks for all the help you have provided me with my writing!! I tried to give 1000000/100 but it wouldn't work :p

[Dani The Unreviewed]

lol i know. thanks

[zunie frost]

thanks a lot danny ... you helped me a lot .. i am grateful to you ... and this poem is really great 100% rating ...

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thanks for the read and the comment.

[zunie frost]

Welcome !!!!

[Ayushi Jha]

These few lines did a prodigious work. Much kudos to you :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thanks for the read and the comment.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

well I really loved that quick wrote up. Can I tell you something, I have been working on writing you a poem. it is almost done. I love you bro! I loved tha poem and keep up the hard work my dear!!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you sister mine :-)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

no problem brother of mine.. I love you so very much!!

[A writer]

And he didn't believe me. Well, my cutie, you better get used to being loved, because you're a lovable lil cutie :'D goochy goo...my cute baby. LMAO

[Dani The Unreviewed]

o_O Andy...you're officially fucked... O_o

[Dani The Unreviewed]

lmao hahaha

[A writer]

*Tap on your nose.* You are sooo cute, when you're mad at me.. Love you gorgeous ❤

[Dani The Unreviewed]

❤ you Andy. ❤

[A writer]

But I love you more! ❤ ❤ ❤ You gorgeous, sweet, god of my heart. ❤

[Dani The Unreviewed]

i think the site is gonna melt away from cuteness overload... lol.

[A writer]

Who cares? You are all that matters to me! Everything, and everyone else is secondary. You are my most beloved, cute little Danny boy. I love every inch of your body, every ounce of your amazingly huge heart, and every infinitely beautiful part of your soul.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Awwwww... :') ❤ ❤ ❤

[A writer]

Danny, you're the most beautiful boy ever. Your cuteness knows no limits, you are my everything. I ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ you my cutie ❤ ❤ ❤

[Dani The Unreviewed]

❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ I've got no words.. :'') i love you too ❤ ❤ ❤

[A writer]

That's all you had to say my love. ❤ ❤ ❤

[Dani The Unreviewed]

❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

DANNY!!! No you cant give up.. don't let big brother win!! you never let me win unless I am having a bad day!! hahahaha.. you 2 are sooo cute.. love y'all!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Love you more ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ as for giving up...no,.. i showed him who's boss last night. ;-)

[A writer]

You did indeed... ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

nope.. I love you so much more. I will stick my foot in your a*s.. hahaha.. I love you so much more!!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

hahaha hahaha I'd like to see you try. okay, maybe not. lol

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

yea I would do it. I am hardcore like that. so there:P

[Dani The Unreviewed]

lmfao. :DDDDDD

[A writer]

Hahaha Hahaha :-D Sorry I missed this one guys. That would be interesting. Lol

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Speak for yourself! i don't know 'bout you, but i rather keep her foot out of my a*s... LMFAO! :-DDDDDDDDD

[A writer]

Knowing you... I think you'd love the experience.... XD hehehe lol :-D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Andy ...you're so lucky, that i don't wanna murder my boyfriend..... XD lol
hmmm. maybe it's not such a bad thing.... LMFAO! HAHAHA :D

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

OMFG you too.. for that I am not going to stick my foot up nobody's a*s.. lol.. I love y'all

[Dani The Unreviewed]

xD xD maybe Andy would like a try.... xD xD lmfao. :DDDD

[A writer]

o_O Danny boy, you're going to regret this... Lol. No more romantic nights for you Mister! Hahaha :-D Just kidding, I couldn't live without you. ♥

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Right.........
.XD xD xD ♥

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Danny! This makes me feel more worthy as a meager poet on this huge place.
And I don't regret reading it!
Thank you for writing this! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah.... How you been?

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Good! A bit on the go kinda rush but good.
How are you Danny?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

eh...not important. where were you the past months?

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Final year of college.
Had to tackle projects and of course the exams.

Why, did I missed something very important? I would like to catch up.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

no. nothing important. just been wondering where were you.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

I use to come at WC even then jus not quite as often as I would like.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

okay. well did you write anything new lately?

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Yes a few. I will RR again! :)