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Aless :')

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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I really appreciate you, That magical touch of your hand, That opens these chains, And takes them off, You don't really know, But that's okay, :) How much you mean to me. How many times you helped me. Even gave me the courage to tell my first bf that I loved him. Though that's gone, It was beautiful, all thanks to you:) Should I list everything we went through together? You're the light in my darkest hours, Someone special, I never knew anyone like you, Your huge heart is a rare sight, I love you sis, And wish you a merry Christmas :) ♥



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Dani The Unreviewed
hope it wasn't too bad.

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Aaawwweeesome!
I like Cool girl. She is talented and seems like a fun person!
Dear Danny, it's a beautiful poem.
Touched me!
Be blessed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

10 Years Ago

yup : ) ma sis is really something :-)
Jyoti_Ablaze

10 Years Ago

I can feel that in your words for her. :)
;-; That was incredibly sweet TT-TT


Posted 10 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
This was really cute man ;) I know she liked it as seen below, hehe.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

10 Years Ago

thanks bro :)
Aww, Danny, it was beautiful!! *hug* I love it so much! I don't know what to say. Reading this has been a great start to my day! Thank you so very much! You're the best brother in the whole wide world

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

10 Years Ago

♥♥♥ ♥♥♥ ♥♥♥ ♥♥♥
Danny ..I really like this poem.beautiful tribute to your sister. "Your huge heart is a rare sight,
I love you sis," Expressive, tender and caring. Very emotional piece. Nicely written. Keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
Dani The Unreviewed

10 Years Ago

yay 23 views!! xD new record lol
Celie Rose

10 Years Ago

congratulations on your 23 views yay!

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Added on December 22, 2015
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Tankcsapda, Agyarország, Germany



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