dopamine overdose

 

city lights,

bright night

i wish you'd dream

of me in summer.

stalagmites,

stalactites,

i hope you'd keep me

in your wonder.

with the heavenly stars

and planets' might,

i wish you'd hold me

in slumber.

unreachable goal,

unbearable soul,

for your beauty

i will always ponder

forever after ever...

Reviews

[DarkIriswriter]

Great work of the metaphoric scheme.The description is a little off with 'I will always be in ponder". Other than the one mistake I love it!

sara

[Peachy]

nice, however the line 'I will always be in ponder' kinda throws me for a loop