If only

If only

A Story by Aldora Sparrow
"

5 word story. Don't need a picture for this one. Interpret the way you want

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If only

time could stop

© 2010 Aldora Sparrow


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But what would happen then? Would we be frozen? I loved this one Aldora. It's very clever.

Posted 15 Years Ago


ohhh...
but ,if only
time could stop...

Posted 15 Years Ago


If time ever stopped, I hope I am living a moment where I am happy, that I would never want to end anyway.

However, if I could freeze time, that would be better.
Great thought to ponder!

Posted 15 Years Ago


a lovely thought to ponder but atlast as another reviewer said "if time stopped what would you do but stand still" I agree with that statement. plus if time stopped, what would be the point of living

Posted 15 Years Ago


thats something nice to think about. but if time stopped, what would you do besides stand still?

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like the open-ness, it gives room for thoughts and new ideas, to consider what if time could stop? Lots of random stuff goes through my mind, and even this one passed through my mind once, but I never truly thought deeply about this. Anyways, I'm rambling, intriguing 5 words.

Posted 15 Years Ago


There was something breath taking about this.
It's so short but full of impact.
Great write.

-Elissa :D

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 22, 2010
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Aldora Sparrow
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I have been writing for longer than I can remember, but it was only during 7th grade did I start to write outside of class. I am still inexperienced and I love helpful comments. I love to write fa.. more..