Awake My Soul

By Ashley

I meet her a year ago. And right away. I knew she was the one. She was so scared to be herself. But I helped her to love who she is. I just wish. Everyone else could see. It's not wrong. This. Is our story. 

Author's Note

This was suppose to be the first chapter. But I'm to upset right now to think straight. So. Yew guys get a crappy intro.

Reviews

[Silent Wolf]

Alright, so the sentances are a little short and I feel some could be combined... From this: "I meet her a year ago. And right away. I knew she was the one. She was so scared to be herself. But I helped her to love who she is. I just wish. Everyone else could see. It's not wrong. This. Is our story." To this: "I meet her a year ago, and right away I knew she was the one. She was so scared to be herself, but I helped her to love who she is. I just wish everyone else could see. It's not wrong, and this is our story." :3

[Broken Hearted Faux]

Yeah, it's pretty short, but it would work for a perfect starter sentence when you're able to edit and add more. Just from that one sentence tho I'm interested ^^

[Kitten]

I'm glad to hear that. I would have more. But I just haven't had time.

[Broken Hearted Faux]

I totally understand