Rip Me Apart

Tear off my skin. 

Take my heart. 

My lungs. 

For a much better use. 

Then running this ugly body. 

I don't deserve to live. 

Nothing is right. 

I'm going to start making some changes. 

I'll be a lot different. 

I can tell you that. 

So get use to it. 

Because I'm gone. 

Reviews

[Death Girl]

Nicely written. I like how you ended it and how dark it is nice write

[Kitten]

Thank you.

[Kt k]

I like the poems dark and gloomy theme i excpessaily like how u ended it with the line because im gone very nice touch.

[Kitten]

Thank you.

[Sam Gregory]

Pulls the reader in as it can be interpreted different to anyone depending on their own situation. Nice

[Kitten]

Thank you. :)

[Sam Gregory]

No problem :)

[Hatchling]

Dark but good. Keep up the good work

[Kitten]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

Dark, gloomy but good...Bravo

[Kitten]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Howlsong]

Great write, each line standing out then ending with a sort of smooth flow drifting off. I like it, your a great writer ^^

[Kitten]

Thank you very much. ^_^

[Eryn ♪]

Um whoa, very dark. Change can be a great thing, just remember not to lose yourself in all of the change.

[Kitten]

Thank you.

[MandaBear]

wow really a really great write =)

[Kitten]

Thank you.