Break Me

Rip open my chest. 

And take my heart. 

I don't deserve to have one. 

All I do. 

Is hurt people with it. 

Break my bones

And remove my tongue. 

Mutilate me. 

Make me what I am inside. 

A monster. 

Who does nothing but destroy

And hurt. 

I'm not meant to be happy. 

I'm not meant to love. 

If all I do is cause pain and suffering. 

   

Reviews

[Ti]

This... makes me want to cry, because I have hurt someone...and this feeling of guilt takes over me and I can't help but think... am I a cruel person, do I deserve to be happy?
Thankyou for sharing your writing, I especially like the picture which goes with it, it's captivating and I love it, nice choice ;)

[Kitten]

Thank you.

[Ti]

Your most certainly welcome. :D
Stick with writing poems, you have a talent for writing, so make sure you use it well ;)

[Kitten]

Thank you very much.

[Ti]

Your welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

remove my tongue.

Mutilate me.

Make me what I am inside.

A monster.

[Sami Khalil]

"I'm not meant to love.

If all I do is cause pain and suffering. "

A powerful and touching write. Thank you for sharing...:).....................

[Kitten]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Glitter]

Don't say this my love...that's not all you cause...you cause happiness and freeness and stress to disappear...you deserve to be happy.