Who am I?

I don't know what I want. 

I don't know who to be. 

Every move I make. 

Feels like a step in the wrong direction. 

I need guidance. 

No. I need to know what's right. 

But how can I know? 

I've just got to guess. 

And take careful steps. 

Not knowing which one. 

Will cause me to fall. 

Or will help me. 

Reviews

[Miyana Sparks]

I love this poem. The reason being that I can relate to it so much, and I am literally going through that phase now. That feeling of being lost. But seriously, do keep writing more poems! You are an awesome writer :)

[1Disawsum]

Nice poem. Your poems, the type of genre your poem takes on, is in a similar style to mine. Your poems are pretty good, I like this poem because, as the other two comments read, were quite relatable to what everybody thinks in one phase of their life. You will know sooner or later, you just have to wait and meanwhile, follow what your heart and soul says. You'll find out where you were meant to go, who you were meant to be soon. That's the point of life. Life is a journey of figuring out. Well done xxx

[Kitten]

Thank you so much.

[LHD]

Such a relatable poem! Good job!

[Kitten]

Thank you.

[gabiaimee]

Very relatable. The choppy, sometimes even contradicting thoughts are just like the questioning mindset of someone who isn't sure. Lovely write.

[Kitten]

Thank you.