My Unforgiven Apology

An apology I wrote to my friend...unforgiven...as the title fortells

I'm tired of this fighting,
it just goes on too long.
We were the best of friends,
but now our friendship,
which was once so strong,
is now beginning to bend.
More fighting- bickering- anger.
What's it all really worth?
We've been friends forever,
so I'll say "I'm Sorry," first.

Reviews

[Becca Bishop]

GAH!!!! So simple yet it conveys so much emotion!!!! I can't begin to count how many times something like that has happened to me. The only difference is that I never say sorry first.
I've got mixed feelings about this poem. On one hand it's beautifully written and it teaches a lesson that all of us (especially I) need to learn. On the other hand, you still haven't given me my chocolate fountain and it teaches a lesson that all of us (especially I) need to learn. Darn you :P

[chandlerl]

Thank you. would you settle for a creme puff...they're quite delicious XD

[Becca Bishop]

ABSOLUTELY NOT!!!! Chocolate fountain or bust :P And by bust I mean...death >;D