Heartbreak

Heartbreak and heartache

I've hurt you.
I've done you wrong.
That I know.
I was gone
and I had told myself I had to go.

That I hadn't hit bottom,
Then I could come back when i did,
and be the person you wanted me to be.
But I was just a kid,
can't you see?

I didn't know what I was doing
I was gone
and I'm sorry.

If I could go back,
tell myself what it would cost
I would
because at the moment
I am lost
without you by me.

And if I could turn back the clock
and tell myself my mistake
I'd turn back so fast
to stop the familiar ache
of heartbreak.

Reviews

[Haylie SD.]

That was really good, but I think you could have added more emotion to it. Because I can tell you are hurting inside, but I don't quite understand why.

[lovelydark&deep]

Your words have captured
My heart and soul
You have such a way
A way with your heart
For it is in your words
That your heart lay open
And I applaud every beat

[chandlerl]

Thank you for your mini poem and your review, I'm glad you finally liked one of my poems. =)

[lovelydark&deep]

You're welcome:) I do enjoy your work this piece just really spoke to me:)