Burning Sun

I am not proud

although I am not frail

in the misgivings I've given to you.

I had forgotten the life- the friendship

the good times- I had with you.

I did indeed, take them for granted

 

Our friendship

was as the sunset,

so beautiful,

but when I got too close

I felt, as if I were burning.

 

But you were and have been

my best friend

and words can never express the sorrow

the sadness

given to me

since you've left.

Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

So sad. The poems gives me the feeling of an impossible relationship; you get too close - burnt, too far - start to miss the sun's heat. . hard to find the balance, and if you do , it's seen as taken for granted.

[chandlerl]

Yes , that is my poem summed up XD
Thank you for your review. =)

[MrKnowAll]

It is my pleasure, and my only request is you to keep writing so wonderfully!

[chandlerl]

I will do my best =)
and thank you