Waste

Tears
sorrow
another relationship
gone to dust
another lifetime
gone to rust
another broken heart
another broken heart
it's all gone to waste
it's all gone to waste

Reviews

[LostandAlone]

This is a very lovely piece of writing... It's very deep... I think it could be tooken to something more than this though... I really like this..

[chandlerl]

Thank you i'll work on it when i have time, after im done reveiwing peopel

[LostandAlone]

Your welcome. Cool.

[Jagger Cyde]

I wish you would expand on this, it looks full of potential.

[Devanshu Rajput]

lovely piece of writting...good use of words to describe deep emotions...i only would say that 'no sight is worse than a pessimist'...really loved it....keep doing...

[chandlerl]

i really wish you had read a different piece, this was not my best work...at all