Magnified

Under a magnifying glass
the sun is beating on my back.
Your stare is ice
Your stare has a haunting resemblance
to the look before my mom would slap me
It's a look that says
we've taken this as far as we can
its the look
I'm about to give you.

Reviews

[xXChanceXx]

Hmm... Interesting write. This is very short, but wonderful, too. It makes the reader think.. Carries a lot of emotion, too... I like this.

[chandlerl]

Thank you glad you liked it. it's really not my best work. if your over 18 i can send you a read request of one of my best pieces of writing...

[xXChanceXx]

Welcomes. It's still very well written. Okay, cool. :)

[chandlerl]

u should send me some read requests so i can read some of your stuff to =D

[xXChanceXx]

Okay, cool, thanks. :)

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

This whispers tension and finality all over it. It's really well put together and carries alot of emotional energy through it's good use of descriptive words. Nice! =)

Kate