Changeling

All these faces seem so strange
I look again, they're all the same
Times change faster than you'll admit
No matter how many ways you try to quit
Time has now become my friend
For me there's no stop, no end
I have found something so pure
Tangled in this web I am no more
Though only now I can see
Those faces still looking back at me
I'm not the only place I've left to go
Thinking over again I devour slow
In this life you have one chance
As for the next I've only a glance
You may not remember, but I do
Thoughts finally are leaving you
In my hands I have a key
The one I need to find me
Now left there's only one more thing
To finally see what happiness can bring

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Irfan Shah]

Great title� A title which would catch the eye of just anyone.... even those who are not into reading and/or poetry.

A different writing style. The thoughts expressed in the lines are disconnected-yet-connected. The poem gives me a strange feeling� the feeling that I am blind and I am trying to take every next step by using memory or my footsteps or something else. I think even I can't understand what I am saying� Well� thats the beauty of the poem I guess

One potential problem: I failed to see a link between the title and the poem. But the poem is so deep that I might have missed certain points this time, and might discover them when I re-read the poem. A good poem is the one which makes us derive new meanings every time we read it; for me this poem falls in that great category.

The dialogue is mystical, mysterious and something which I would term as random ramblings...

Good work overall!