Reminder
A Poem by 暗い雪
Just thinking at the end of the day, quick stream of conscious 
I rememberThe WordsThe FaceThe NameThe GameJust a sad memory
© 2012 暗い雪
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an interesting ribbon. . .maybe the last line should read a little differently. Perhaps: memory/a sad. It's quirky and could twist it up a bit. Just a suggestion. Thanks for posting.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Added on October 12, 2012
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暗い雪
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I love to immerse myself in other worlds and also create my own.
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