A play with words

Sun thing complete. Lee different Ant

Who man I am, Homer say pen is my tear then soared

The tear shakes spherical in a fellow

The mid-sum errs, knights dream of drag on ours

Two soon the son sets, a trap four the dark knight

He six up, the brake fast  speed, Dee pleats his heir

Had to bury Id, it dyed, a tone for Hugh

And cry as I end, dead in a cell

It began in, the office sir, for a rest

My crime, I failed Dee, test results

Indicated I was a man with van aerial

Dee seized to fawn, I Kate passed it on

For a reefer Al.  The man you are Anna

Plays less with your mind,  as Sid is more extreme

The ex’s pan, shuns my mind are not

Due to Ron, Amy was the one who was faith

Full is the nun, sense, this is the fine Al

Curtain!

Author's Note

so sorry, produced in a moment of stress at work, against better judgement will put it on here for a while

Reviews

[Raven Tempest]

HA! great read...took me twenty mins to read it tho...

[Chance]

Great minds must think alike! I loved this!
Have you read Bill Bryson's History of the English Language in America? Don't know why that came to mind.

[hogan]

have read some of Bill Brysons work but not sure about this one. thanks

[Extant]

Poems like this that I read, I smile at. (Sometimes I laugh.) I agree with That_Girl, I had to go back and re-read, but that's what makes this so great, at least to me. It is quite a play with words, reminds me of old British comedies.

[hogan]

just looked at it again myself, it's very hard work. Wonder if you found all the hidden threads and hidden phrases, several are split by lines, full stops and overlaps. Thanks for reading and responding

[That_Girl]

Huh... it's definitely different. I had to read it out loud... my brain kept having to repeat certain words haha

[hogan]

A moment of madness, I think it needs several reading to pick up all the strands and connections. Had some staff problems at work and let my over worked mind take it out on a sheet of paper.