Knock Knock

This is the first time i've tried something like this. Not sure if it is any good but first time for everything! plus i am getting in the mood for halloween :D

Knock knock who is there? 

I feel nothing but the cold air. 

Knock knock who is there? 

I sense someone is beginning to stare.

Knock knock who is there? 

Come on now this isn't fair. 

Knock knock is it inside my head?

But then I get dragged under my bed. 

Knock knock who is at the door? 

My life is now no more. 

Reviews

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

I find this pretty clever and it's a good turn out :)
Though I feel there should feel there should be a space between every two sentences. So then, it'll look more structured.

[DarrinReay]

Thank you :)
and i agree! I normally structure it, i forgot to this time haha :)

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

I often forget to structure mine as well when I write it too fast. Haha. And anytime :)