Rhymes don't do justice for her

Rhymes don't do justice for her

A Poem by Mr. Revan
"

Just something off the top of my head.

"

She's quite the delight,

She only has a few frights.

She's fun and interesting,

and I've grown bored of trying to make this rhyme.

 

 

---

 

She's a gal that has a unique story,

she's got talent, kicks a*s, and isn't afraid of death.

 

She gets me to behave myself,

and try new things.

 

She makes me think happy thoughts,

whereas all the others have made me fret and contemplate.

 

I have to wait a bit during the day before she shows herself,

but just to say hi, I think,

 

the opportunity to know how she's been,

and to discuss virtually --ANYTHING--,

 

without fear of judgement;

the ability to trust each other..

 

DO I uderstand it fully? Hell no.

But theres this.. connection.

 

She can change my days from grim to pleasant...

just by the little quirks she has about herself.

 

I feel, not lucky, but fortunate, and honored,

to be able to know you...

 

It doesn't matter the distance or the obstacles,

I feel the hints of a fate. A.. destiny.

 

 

 

 

 

(For her)

© 2011 Mr. Revan


Author's Note

Mr. Revan
Don't go guessing ladies and gents.

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I won't guess if you tell me! :p

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. And i'm really happy for you :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Mr. Revan
Mr. Revan

Green Pond, FL



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i've lived so many lives, its hard to separate the fact from the fiction. reality versus imagination. I think Im far more comfortable, forever dreaming, inside the skin of a thousand personas. They.. more..