Book One A Hero's Journey: Prologue

A short prologue of my book A Hero's Journey.

 

PROLOGE: There was a time when the Dark Ones ruled the land, where they and their high queen sought out their prey. They had amazing strength speed and stamina which made it easy to catch their prey. But one brave soul known as Tigiti rebelled against the high queen. He took his sword, Sangiria into combat. It was there, atop the ancient peaks of Drottingheim that he managed to subdue the high queen and those of her like.

Reviews

[Barbara Tennyson]

PROLOUGE --This is misspelled in the text.
And a different font/size may be easier on the reader. At the moment, the lines are nearly on top of each other.

[E.L.C.]

This is a really intriguing prologue and it makes me want to continue reading. You do however need to do some proof reading for grammar. Grammar was (and is) the bane of my existence as a writer. I used to think it was not important (that's what editors are for right?), but it really is. Check your inbox for the grammatical suggestions.

[Lizardo]

The prologue has gotten me intesrested in the book, Nice way to start the book

[Ryan Henderson]

I am glad you are interested :)

[Mazie]

Great way to open it! :) Catches the readers attention quick

[Ryan Henderson]

thanks for the review!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

have read up to chapter 4 and am loving it!!!!!!!!!!!

[Ryan Henderson]

Thank you for reading so much so far, I am glad that you are loving it! Just keep reading, it gets better. A lot better. :D

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I certainly will keep read! In fact just try and stop me!

[Ryan Henderson]

lol I will not stop you by any means :D Thank you so much again for reading this!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Good I wouldn't want anyone it get hurt ;). Your welcome.