She is

She's the path I've never known,

one I'll always walk alone.

She's the apple of my eye;

she's the blue in all the sky.

She's the flower that never dies.

She's the fighter who never cries.

She's my emotions never shown;

She's the skill I'll never hone.

She's a queen without a throne,

a constant walk in the unknown.

She's all of life's greatest highs,

a work of art best not revised.

She's the girl I tried to woo;

she's the girl I listened to.

She's the tear I feel inside,

and yet has all my joy supplied.

She's the melody of my song;

her smile makes me sing along.

And no matter how the tune may play,

the sun rises for her everyday.

Reviews

[Riley Justine]

"a work of art best not revised." I LOVE that line. This is beautifully written, really good job.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

I though the poem was very well written.. I wish someone would write me a poem like that.. LOL.. I wouldn't mind at all.. lol.. Anyway Dante keep up your hard work.. Who was the lucky lady you wrote this for??

[Not here]

one of my friends (wink wink) from my school. ive liked her for a long time, and over the past two months we've gotten really close :)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Oh I see.. good luck little brother.. You go and get her.. LOL

[Not here]

lol yeah its going really good :)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

well that is great.. love you lil brother!! :)

[Perfect Mistake]

This poem was so cute! My favorite part was " A queen without a throne". Very beautifully written, she sounds very special to you, hopefully you should her this poem (:

[Not here]

thank you very much :) im glad you liked it.

[pams poems]

suchv a beautiful poem i enjoyied it very much

[Not here]

haha thank you pam :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Great use of repetition in your verse with a nice flow of words about a special someone.
Rhymes and smooth sounds
for the one you love.

[Not here]

thank you josie :) glad u liked it

[dan]

david, this is such a sweet piece devoted to a young lady whom I HOPE knows you feel all of these things. Your rhyming skills are so much improved from before - - say 6-8 months ago - - back then the rhymes often felt forced, a struggle to put together...now it is all so smoothly choreographed and tight. Great write, friend. take care...dan

[Not here]

thanks dan :) and she does know how i feel. everythings really smooth right now so it comes out in my work

[Aphy!]

Really loved it. And I meant to give you a 100 the first time but I clicked too soon

[Aphy!]

I was enchanted. As i finished reading a line I was excited to read/see the next. It flowed effortlessly and really touched me. I saw myself actually reading it out to someone special to me. But I am really jealous because I myself cannot write/do any poetry but I really like yours. This was a brilliant piece!

[Not here]

thank you very much :) and i think you should give it a shot. i didnt think i could write poety either until i tried.

[Aphy!]

I'll try hey, and i heard it soothes the mind. AND MY MIND NEEDS A LOT OF THAT :-)

[Not here]

haha okay :) well glad i could help with it

[Saddam]

She's the melody of my song;
her smile makes me sing along.
And no matter how the tune may play,
the sun rises for her everyday.

Such a beautiful write dear friend.
Great passion on it.

[Not here]

thanks Saddam :) im glad you enjoyed it

[Shae]

I love that while reading this I went on a private trip in my mind. Beautiful. Keep em' coming.

[Not here]

always :) thanks for reading