almost there, i am doing this so you can be featured. i know youare proably wondering why i am doing this.. I am too at the moment... but you got another point
Maybe this one will get you the five stars. I am getting tired now. I think it's because I keep repeatng myself. There, one more point... hope that raises you up a bit more
Ugg... that twit again... Clearly can't write as well as you and is jealous. He is one of the haters you are writing about... and I am one of the lovers you are talking about. So here, there is another point to bring up your score because of an uninspired, jealous hater...
I liked the pace! I see Carlos said something nice. You are right with the words, and put them so clearly, it can't be misunderstood. However, it's almost 2am right now, can' t sleep so I catching up on reading... I liked the ending because it says we all must try even though it is harder to spread harmony then break out war. Nice job!!!!
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