Rolling Echoes

A short poem.

Rolling echoes in my dreams broken hearts make muffled screams,
All through the night the anguish roars till my brain is battered sore,
In reflected light i see my life polaroids of pain and strife,
In the darkness all i see is how I think things might have been....

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Aries]

I Like this...short and sweet...A few words that speak volumes....

Great Write~

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

good. My suggestions to make it great?
-watch where you put commas/periods - read it outloud and if you don't feel a pause then don't use a comma/period there. Don't try to force the flow. Otherwise, good.