resolve

poem for the cute ones...

A vague vision

of you and I

cast upon a decision

of mine...

 

I want you to choose

the ripples of time

just not to confuse

the thought of mine...

 

I figure you would

discard me like others who try

instead you toy me...

to wonder this decision of mine...

 

why am I ashamed

why do I cry

when your in pain

I hate this problem of mine...

 

you are what I call pure

it's probably a lie

but you seem to be the cure

to this hurt of mine...

 

see me like you never do

warm, and the loving guy

and then I'll love you

then...disapears this problem of mine...

 

please love me...and I will love you...

Author's Note

nice comments pwease

Reviews

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why am I ashamed
why do I cry
when your in pain
I hate this problem of mine...

Well i love these lines they are so truthful and full of heartbreak

you are what I call pure
it's probably a lie
but you seem to be the cure
to this hurt of mine...

These lines are so truthful as well and speak of self image and feelings

The whole write is simply amazing i think, well written and put toegther, any emotional write is beautiful.