The odd girl meets odd boy

The odd girl meets odd boy

A Poem by opaque-writer

stutter,

as the boy enters

and a girl ponders

and they never

meet...eye to eye

 

she is like a squirrel

and he acts dull

but she makes him feel

as if placed in an enchated lull

 

and he wishes to be dear

to this spastic yet adorable girl

and wants to near

her seductive whirl

 

and he would hope

she would say yes

and she would enjoy

this simple request

 

so I ask her now

with my heart set a neon blue

I love you so far right now

will you love me too?

© 2008 opaque-writer


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HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY!!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


aww this is so cute...you are a great writer...i wish i could be... but its sooo sad. Alex be happy!

Posted 17 Years Ago


Very well spoken.
Love we have all had and are able to relate.
It flows from start to finish and the ending is great.
Lol, sorry didn't do that on purpose.
(Habit)

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on November 28, 2008

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opaque-writer

Raleigh(must I say it...), NC



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I'm a simple, calm, sarcastic, and mild hearted (reason why I say such a thing is because well, look at my writing to find out) more..