Dreamer I shall be

Will you allow me to dream?

or will the nightmares haunt me?

Every night will i scream?

Will the darkness surround me?

 

Am i allowed to leave?

The screams in my head?

Please set me free!

Unlock the chains that trap me here!

 

Your the only one who can!

You have the key in your hand, so open the door!

So i can stand...

in my dreams once more.
 

Reviews

[Jessica Benfield]

brilliant, absolutely brilliant. i loved the feel of being trapped in someone else's controlled world, when all we want to do is to be let free and dream. beautiful, amazing peice!
smiles,
jess

[Shadows of Sight]

It's the insane asylum of the mind. But who holds the key? Who is the gate keeper? Sounds like this could lead into a nice little short story about a dream that is locked away and needs to be freed!
Nice work!

[Stephanie Allen]

I liked the last two lines. I just wonder if you could maybe delve a little deeper than what you have here? It was a good start, anyway. Also, make sure you watch your/you're - you mixed that up here.