What would you say?

What would you say if I told you that I know that I'm dying? That I can feel a clock inside of me, ticking away the seconds of my life and making me one more moment closer to death than I was before? What about if I told you that death is sprinting at full speed, heading straight for me, and there is nothing anybody can do about it? What would you say?

Author's Note

I know it sucks so sorry peeps

Reviews

[Stephen]

If you had asked me to answer it then I would have answered,"I will keep you right behind my eyes, into the depth of my heart as an individual beat of it inhaling the scent of yours throughout the life kissing your foots n sand you walk on until the end of my life cus my life's in you so yours in me...if the death called you first then I would be there, holding your soft hand, with you letting my breathes release into the winds just with you."
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But I know am not that lucky guy who keeps you behind his eyes but am sure...the guy is very who is gonna spend the days n nights of his life with you n of course keeping you right behind his eyes.

I like the idea of the poem. The Theme is very cool.
Am very surprised to know that...just within the few days you have become my fav. "AUTHOR" but yeah I love this..am honoured to have a great writer n of course a beautiful friend in you.

Keep writing! :)

[Delaney Thomas]

"I will keep you right behind my eyes, into the depth of my heart as an individual beat of it inhaling the scent of yours throughout the life kissing your foots n sand you walk on until the end of my life cus my life's in you so yours in me...if the death called you first then I would be there, holding your soft hand, with you letting my breathes release into the winds just with you." That was very poetic, I really think you should put your work up on here so I can read more of it. And thanks for reviewing all of my stuff! :)

[Stephen]

Thanks :) your words make my day but am not sure I'll upload my stuffs here or not cus for now,as I've mentioned before, my stuffs are on blogger n now a days am planning to leave this cafe's site soon which is why yet I really don't have plan for dropping my work here. But heyyy..all good. As long as I am on the site. ..I would always love reading your beautiful stuffs so keep writing. You are far kind, Miss Thomas :)
Stay beautiful!

[Coyote Poetry]

I would tell you to get out of death way. A interesting poem. I like poetry with question and mystery. You make the reader want more. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kasey Miriam]

You've actually got something really good here. It just needs some work thats all. Great job !

[Takoda Sorvillo]

Excellent use of iambic pentameter! Love it