I'm alive.

.rebel.

 

Like a spear
It's going deep inside me
Tearing my soul, in threads.
Inside me
It is shrill.
The more I breathe it in,
Is the more it hurts
The more I breathe it out,
Is the more it hurts
Again-
The blade is sharp.
Choking me in
Cuting my inside
It's deepen my wounds
It's the air I breathe.
It's giving me lif
I'm alive.
I am Alive!

Reviews

[KayOss]

I'm alive! Nothing much to be said about this piece, except it's a thought-provoking piece that is deeply emotional and compelling. Well done.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Very well written and a very deep piece.
Lovely flow :)

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Wow. Intense. ALIVE! Very good write! Great flow and imagery....tearing my soul in threads...wow.