..if I could let you know. . .

love.time.wait.chance.life.

If I could let you know,
All the feelings of my heart
All the love if I could show…I never let you go.
Deep inside, I found you
Raising high from my soul,
I looked at you and you smiled at me at all
But if I could smile back at you
If I could say what’s true,
I never let you go; now I want you to know
I love you.
I’m wasted away,
It’s all that I have
But if I could get you back
I’ll give you my heart;
Just look at me for once
If I could get the last chance-
I do want to live..
So please forgive,
And come back to me
I’ll say everything; I want you to know…

-

I love you.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Words and sentiments that are sometimes to late in the coming. This is a sad plea to go back to a love that was once had. Great job in writing this. Thank you for entering it into the In My Loves Words contest.

[Adela Muresan]

This is such a beautiful, and apprently sincere poem.
I like the fact that you chose to end the poem with I LOVE YOU :) ,even if it is a kind of common ending.

A.M.

[Imperfection]

This is an emotional write.
I tend to relate such things with the past. These words will stay with me for sometime now.

I think this is a great write.
Outstanding, actually.

[Lauren Burch]

Delicate words here. The sadness is immenent. Beautifully written. Definitely a finalist in the "it's uncanny... this love!" contest. Good luck! :)

-Lauren Burch

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautiful, loving sentiments. I hope the person you wrote this for appreciates you kind soul and wonderful words. Thank you for sharing. This lifted my morning.
Light,
Siddartha