~come to me~

i saw the contest for the ides of march, read the description and suddenly wrote this.

lo!

behold!

life can be in danger-

-The Danger-

oh..my friend

my dear

My Self

beware-
you could die
ides of march is marching towards you

run

dear

run

like Caesar

...oh..Caesar...

 

~my Caesar~

 

please
Come To Me

~cease ere~

...

come to me
before it's too late

come to me

in my grave

you'll be safe

 ~ you'll be safe ~

 

March 14, 2008
11:38 PM ~ Friday {IST}

Reviews

[jen -- JG]

Clever poem, short lines and layout give great sense of urgency.

Well done

jen

[Writer CW Kirkland]

I enjoyed reading this poem, and I really liked the style. I felt a true sense of urgency, and I think this was achieved by your short statements in each line...some being only one word. This was well written, and I applaud you for being different with the formatting. Thank you for sharing your writing on the Cafe, and I look forward to reading more in the future.

[Laughing Lunatic]

This is very different to what I normally read but it really seems to make you think. I enjoyed the intensity to the poem and then the calm. I enjoyed reading it great write. =)

[KayOss]

Why is it that when I review your poetry, I'm always tempted to begin with, "hrm..."? It must be because each of your pieces makes me think. I love this poem. You did something different with the formatting. Heck, you did something different. I like the voice in this poem. I also enjoyed the wordplay. Kudos on yet another splendid poem.

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

It is different. I like it though. I am glad that the ides is almost over. Nothing too bad happened today for me.
Thanks for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha