Oh my God!

It's a love poem.

My husband's dead of cold and fever,
oh Mr. Devil, do something
don't shiver.
Please, I pray...
Turn on the fire;
look my husband's chilled in his bier!
I've seen in the news
Hell's going to freeze
please see the temperature
if you could increase.

Oh, my deary William. . .
Look..he's turning blue
do something Mr. Devil
or I'm gonna sue you!

Oh Willy, it'd rather be better
if you'd go to Heaven,
or if you could've waited my love
now see, what's happened.

Hell froze, oh dear...now where you'll stay?
Wait... Love, I'm bringing your blanket
yes, I'm on my way!

Author's Note

Just a muse write, but a love poem :)

Reviews

[Midnight Dreams]

Gosh! When winter sets in life......
Very Good!

[Lena Vanelslander]

:-) ... what can I say? It's good ... funny (though it shouldn't but it is)

[Helena]

LOL, a whimsical and unique write my friend. I enjoyed the read!

Helena :)

[xlynne]

i don't like when you said sue you in the 2nd stanza, i just don't think it works. sueing someone is such a business like thing, you want something like money so that's why you do it. in that stanza its like you want him to do it, svae William because you need it. you need him saved, you're desperate so some word like break you i think would sound better. but other than that, i think its a great love poem. i think that through instances like this, people see how much someone loves the other person more clearly than if they were to say i love you, you complete me and all that crap. its the heart wrenching situations that help the love shine through. anyways, done ranting now. great write!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

lolz..! This is great and left a smile on my face :)
The closing lines are very apt! great work!

[Laura E. Aranda]

AHAHAHAA
I LOVE IT
DID you enter it into my contest? I think it is great!! Sooooo funny. Thanks for asking me to read it....if you have not entered it into my contest yet please do so...thanks again
Cheers and good luck to you, lea

[EliJoLee]

bah!
i love it!
everything u write
is just phenomanal!!