and that's all i am.

..to her...

...like a swirling feather
i touched the breeze

-with shivering fingers-

i breathed for the first time
and breathed for the lifetime
~
in a wink of the eyes
i drank oceans of love
and smiled
with the smile of life

you're my breath
my love
my life
you're my soul
and that's all i am.

thank you for being my everything
love you forever and ever more...

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

so romantic and so beautifully written i almost cried lol
i love the first line as well as the last so very lovely.
Chloe

[Helena]

What a perfectly lovely romantic poem. So many beautiful stanza's penned but I think
this one is my favourite!

"in a wink of the eyes
i drank oceans of love
and smiled
with the smile of life"

Fantastic!

Helena

[xlynne]

in the sentence: i breathed for the first time/and breathed for the lifetime, you just stated so rightly, so perfectly how love feels. its all for the first time. you find who you are when you're with them and its like you're finally living. beautiful piece! so full of love and honesty!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"you're my breath
my love
my life
you're my soul
and that's all i am. "

Damn this is AWESOME!
SO deep and intriguing..I'm very happy with the flow too..
Beautiful piece of writing...

[EliJoLee]

oh my god!!
thats so sweet...
very beautifully written!
just the emotion of the whole thing
was glorious!